Hi there, thanks for getting back so quickly. I think for Saturday we could aim for around ten thirty.
We can meet by the back gate near the park path, that worked well before with the strollers.
I spoke with Sam and he can bring the extra folding table and maybe the larger cooler.
If the weather turns, we can still use the covered porch but the grill needs to stay by the steps.
Do you know if Dana is bringing the potato dish again or should I pick up some sides from the deli?
Also, I have the extra canopy in the shed, just remind me tonight and I will load it into the car.
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Yes, I can take a look at that document for you tonight. I think the main issue is with the third section.
You might want to swap the order of the second and fourth paragraphs so it flows better.
Also, could you send me the latest version from the shared folder? I only have the draft from last Tuesday.
If we adjust the title formatting and maybe reduce the number of bullet points, it will be easier to scan.
I can add comments in the margin instead of rewriting everything directly, that will give you more control.
And if you want, I can join a call in the afternoon to walk through the sections together.
Let me know if you need me to check the footnote references as well, I noticed two of them were repeated.