I looked at the schedule again and I think tomorrow works better than today.
I can start earlier, finish the notes, and circle back once everything is organized.
The main thing I wanted was a little uninterrupted time because I kept switching tasks and that made the afternoon feel scattered.
If you still want to go over the rough outline, send it when you can and I will mark the spots that seem confusing.
I also remembered the small detail you mentioned about keeping the intro brief, which I agree with completely.
It usually reads cleaner that way and makes the rest easier to follow.
I am not stuck, just moving slower than expected, and I would rather send something steady than rush through it.
Once I finish the first pass, I will check tone, spacing, and whether anything repeats more than it should.
That should keep it neat and straightforward.

I finally tried the new route through the park and it was much quieter than the main street.
I think that helped more than I expected because I came back less distracted and actually finished what I had been putting off.
The best part was giving myself an hour without checking every notification or bouncing between tabs.
I should probably do that more often instead of waiting until everything feels crowded.
I also cleaned up the small pile on my desk, which turned into sorting old papers I kept meaning to handle earlier.
Nothing dramatic, just one of those ordinary resets that makes the next day easier.
If you are still free this weekend, I am happy to help with the outline and maybe look over the second draft too.
Send it whenever you are ready, and I will keep my feedback simple and easy to scan.