I was meaning to get back to you sooner, and the short answer is yes, that plan still works for me.
I kept the afternoon open because I figured things might shift a little, so moving it later is perfectly fine.
I actually think giving it a bit more time will make the whole thing easier and less rushed for everyone involved.
I can bring the notes I mentioned before, and I also rewrote that list so it is simpler to skim.
If the room is noisy, we can step outside for a few minutes and finish talking there.
I do not need anything special set up ahead of time, just a quick message when you are on the way.
I have been trying to keep this week organized, so having a clear time helps me stay on track.
Either way, I am flexible and happy to adjust if the morning turns into one of those unexpectedly busy days.
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I looked over the draft last night and I think it is much clearer now than the earlier version.
The middle section especially feels easier to follow, and the order of the points finally makes sense to me.
I made a few light edits on my copy, mostly to trim repeats and make the transitions sound more natural.
If you want, I can send those notes separately so nothing gets buried in a long thread.
I am around tomorrow morning and again later in the day, so either window is fine from my side.
There is no rush if you want another pass first, though I do think it is in good shape already.
I would rather keep the final wording simple than add more lines that do not really help.
Let me know which version you prefer, and I can respond quickly once I see your update.