I checked on that earlier and I think the easiest plan is to keep it simple for now.
I already moved a few things around on my calendar so I can make time later in the week, and that should help everything feel less rushed.
I also realized I was overthinking the whole situation when a quick note would probably solve most of it.
If you want, send me the latest version and I can look through it tonight.
I am especially happy to help tighten the wording, because that usually takes less time than people expect.
Tomorrow morning is busy on my side, but after lunch I should be free for a while.
I do better when I can review things in one sitting, so one complete draft would be ideal.
If anything changes suddenly, just message me again and I will adjust as best I can.

I meant to get back to you sooner, but the afternoon got away from me and I did not want to send a rushed reply.
I went over the notes again, and I think your first instinct was probably the right one.
The second option could work, but it feels like it adds extra steps without much benefit.
I would rather keep the process steady and make small adjustments as we go.
If you are available later, we can compare versions and settle on one direction quickly.
I can also take care of the cleanup after that, which might save time tomorrow.
Another thought is to leave the opening section as it is and focus only on trimming the middle.
That seems to be the part that gets harder to follow.
Either way, I am on board and happy to help finish it cleanly.