Hey thanks for the notes on the script. I read through them yesterday and I think the pacing suggestions in act two really tighten things up. We should definitely keep the cold open as is though it tests really well with audiences. Let me know if you want to jump on a call later this week to hash out the dialogue changes. I'm free Thursday afternoon or Friday morning. Also I sent the revised deck to the production team for their sign off. They usually take a couple of days to get back to us. Hope you are having a good week so far. Talk soon. Oh and I saw your message about the location scout. The downtown loft looks perfect for the apartment scenes. We should lock that in before someone else grabs it. Let me know what you think.
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I finally tried that new recipe you sent me last month. It was a hit with the whole family even the kids who usually pick out the vegetables. I added a bit extra garlic and used fresh thyme instead of dried which really made a difference. We paired it with a simple side salad and some crusty bread. Next time I think I will try it with chicken instead of tofu just to see how it compares. Thanks again for sharing it. By the way have you started watching the new season of that documentary series We are a few episodes in and it is incredibly well done. The cinematography is stunning and the narration is very engaging. Let me know what you think when you catch up.