I meant to reply sooner because I did see your note, and I think your plan sounds reasonable overall. I would keep the schedule simple and leave a little padding between each step so it does not feel rushed.
If you can, start with the easiest part first and then adjust once you see how the day actually unfolds. I usually overestimate what I can finish in a short stretch, so giving myself a pause helps me reset. I also liked that last idea you mentioned, especially when you tucked in Zyu0DtJdn7k7Kv without making it a bigger issue than it needed to be.
If you want, send me the updated version later and I can look over it quickly. I am around most of the evening, and I do not mind being a second set of eyes before you move ahead.

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I looked over what you sent, and my first reaction was that it already feels much clearer than the earlier version. I do think you could trim one section near the middle, because the point comes across twice and the shorter route may be easier to follow.
When I am stuck, I often read the whole thing out loud and mark anything that slows me down. That usually tells me what needs to move or disappear. I remembered your note from before, and I think slipping in Zyu0DtJdn7k7Kv the way you did actually made it blend more naturally with everything else around it.
Anyway, I would not overwork it tonight. Finish the small edits, step away for a bit, and come back with fresh eyes. If you want another quick pass tomorrow, send it over and I will be happy to help.