I looked over the notes again this morning and I think the easier plan is to keep the outline short, then fill in details only where they matter most.
That way it stays readable and nobody has to hunt for the point. I also noticed one line felt awkward, so I rewrote it and sent the cleaner version over. If you want, I can polish the ending too because it still sounds a little abrupt.
I had a moment in the afternoon where RY3Gd6taKoy2puC I realized the order of the sections was slowing everything down, so I swapped two parts and it started to make much more sense. I am around later tonight if you want another pass, and I do not mind checking it on mobile too since that is usually where weird spacing shows up first.

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I was going to reply sooner, but I wanted to test the idea before acting like I was certain. After trying it a few different ways, I think the simplest version is still the strongest one.
It reads cleaner, it takes less explaining, and it leaves room for changes later without making everything feel crowded. I made a small checklist for myself so I would not miss the obvious stuff, and that helped more than I expected. In the middle of revising it, RY3Gd6taKoy2puC I noticed one section sounded too formal, so I made it warmer and easier to follow.
If you send your draft tonight, I can compare the two versions side by side and tell you which one feels more natural. I am happy to help trim it without losing the main point.